A sneak preview of Katherine and Hippoloids Script

Apr 30, 201514 min read

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TheCrimsonEmo

Published: Apr 30, 2015

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::The Crimson Emo's Journal::

Dudley St, Birmingham 5 by TheCrimsonEmo

Westgate St, Gloucester 5 by TheCrimsonEmo

Commission: Katherine and Rhys by QuantumJinx

Hey guys, welcome to my DA page.

Here I plan to bring you all my latest projects for the future as well as upload all my artwork and photography.
My main aspiration in life is to make it big as an animator and game designer, I hopefully wanna move to the big city and set up my own little art studio so I can make my dream happen.
Thanks so much for supporting, and hopefully you'll enjoy my work too when it's ready.
- Ashton

I am grateful for everyone who views and enjoys my work, sorry if I can't respond to every single comment and message I get but I hope you understand, very often I'm really busy and I can only respond to a handful of messages at a time.

If you wanna use my Photography as stock or colour in any of my art, don't hesitate to ask. But please wait for my permission first otherwise I'm going to treat your devitation as art theft and instantly report it.

::A sneak preview of Katherine and Hippoloids Script::

For a long time now I've really been on the bench about sharing the rough, unfinished script for this project and was hoping I wouldn't have any need to share it with the world until it was ready, but as my own time is always against me, it really pains me that I've been working passionately on this project for nearly 12 whole years now on the sidelines yet have absolutely nothing worth showing for it besides unfinished concept artwork, an apartment littered with notes of concept ideas to go into the project and this script which isn't even finished.
It personally shames me to no end that I'm so passionate about my own project yet have next to nothing to actually show for it in the decade that I've been working on it so I just want to share this rough edit script of the project, if just to prove to the world its something that actually exists and I'm not just constantly yabbering on about nonsense in half of my journals.

For those of you who don't follow my blogs/journals or aren't already in the know, Katherine and Hippoloid is a series I've been working on and kept on the side throughout most of my entire life that centres around a group of British teenagers with superhuman abilities who are trying to defend their world from a hostile alien invasion let by an alien dictator bent on dominating the entire universe.

I want to make it into this really unique, story driven action adventure series that centres around using both surreal and real world environments as stages that you traverse and explore in a really unique and stylish way.
I won't go into too much detail here, but I plan to hopefully make this into a 4 part series with a potential 5th entry on the side and even 6th if things go well.

My personal goal as of right now is just to have the games script and story finished and presentable in full, design all the concept art for every single character and possibly turn the series into an online web comic or even an online animated series, just so I have the series out in the public's eye in some physical form or another until I can gather the resources I need to actually create this into the video game series I always envisioned it to be.

But anyway, for those who are interested in this, I wanted to share a huge chunk of the rough script in draft so you can really get a feel for the story and the characters in this world I'm trying to create.
The script is completely rough, I haven't gone through and corrected any spelling typos, grammar or anything of the sort. I just wanted to get my ideas out in the open if just to satisfy my own personal fears of my PC one day dying on me or even worse, God forbid, myself, and this just becoming lost with it.

But anyway, what I'm about to share covers a good chunk of the story from the 1st entry in the series and also share a scene or two from the planned sequel that's already been written up to go with it.
This all still being worked on as I post it and nothing is finalised or set in stone yet so there could still be plenty of changes made along the way.

I would love to hear feedback if you have any you'd be interested in sharing.
I apologise again for all of the spelling and grammar errors you'll likely find throughout this script as I often when I write, I type fast using notepad just to get all of my ideas out there on screen so I can compile them properly later on.
I hope you enjoy reading through it nonetheless.

Katherine and Hippoloid Rough Unfinished Script P1music
main theme - Real girl
story
the story starts off with katherine floating in space, lost and confused as to how she got here, she looks around to see a fleet of gigantic spaceships approaching, as they open fire on her she lunges herself towards them and leaps from spacecraft to spacecraft as they shoot each other and blow up in a flurry of flames and debris as she leaps towards the giant mothership
on the deck of the ship cannons and laser turrets activate and aim at her, firing a dizzying arry of hellfire down on her as she runs and leaps towards the cockpit, crashes through the window, and as the guards try to grab her, dodge their attacks and fight her way through them, fight her way through the corridors and run into the power core room, as the enemies open fire on her, she leaps into the air, tricking them into blowing up their own power source
the mothership breaks apart as katherine leaps through the debris dives out of the ship, making a final giant push forward to throw Katherine and Hippoloid Rough Unfinished Script P2next scene
untitled's laboratory
Elevator doors open as Sg. kawalo who was inside is about to walk out to report back to untitled.
flu is standing there waiting for him
flu - looks like you're about to lose your rank, sergant...
kawalo - Untitled may frighten me Flu, but you do not.
flu - *hmph* and when has that ever made a difference?
flu walks into the elevator and takes it down while sg. kawalo is left to face untitled.
outside Untitled's main office, hippochelsea walks out flexing his neck and arm muscles. he walks past sg. kawalo without saying anything as kawalo continues to walk into untitleds office
untitled is sitting in his chair faced away from sg kawalo and faced away from the large monitor on the wall behind them, but instead looking at the smaller one in front of him, arching his fingers.
As soon as Kawalo enters the room, two rex soldiers stand behind him, ready to escort him out on untitleds demand.
Untitled: everything in my plan is going according to schedlule. Soon

:Sonic Craft Adventure update:

While I've got this journal page open I wanted to give an update for those who have an interest in my newest project, Sonic Craft Adventure.
So far progress is going better than I could of possibly imagined. I've knuckled down and have spent the past two days working tirelessly on the first act in the game, Tropical Falls Zone Act 1
The stage is already fully playable from start to finish and I'm now focusing all of my attention on the landscaping of the stage, the mountains and the scenery. Once the stage is finished I'll start adding in all of the props, items, animals, enemies, etc and show it off along with the concept artwork in a youtube video.

I haven't worked on any new character models yet. I don't want to start adding enemies to the map and giving any of the characters AI until every single character model is complete so for now, my focus is just mainly going to be on the scenery of each stage and not the characters that will populate it.
It really is looking much better than I imagined so far though.
Here's a are a few sneak screenshots to give you a very basic idea of what it all looks like so far, though bare in mind the finished project will look far better than this.

I'm listening to these beautiful renditions of popular Disney and Studio Ghibli songs while I work, it's really helping me relax. I just had to share them
www.youtube.com/watch?v=5DiMoe…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=OwHc05…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=J_WbO_…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=JlanrU…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=z83PcH…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=s0IrwQ…

::My Current Projects::

Sonic Adventure Minecraft - Beta V3 out now
Shenmue Minecraft - Beta V2 out now
Sonic Craft Adventure
Minecraft World
SegaSonic ArcadeCraft
Shenmue 3: The Complete Saga
Katherine and Hippoloid
Robotnik in Wonderland
Dr. Eggman's Cross Dimensional Adventure